Betrayal
Johnny Fireheart reached into the pocket of his expensive sheepskin jacket and pulled out his car keys. As he tossed them in the air he couldn’t help admiring the pristine, black Ford Capri; a gift from his exotic lover, Choo-Choo LaTrain. It was a Capri that had seen the black side of the road and had escaped with not even a loose chipping in a tyre tread. Just like Johnny.
The light flickered outside Club Tropicana; it was a dive. Johnny knew it, Choo-Choo knew it and so did most of the low-lives that lived in the bustling metropolis known as Greater Londonbury.
“God,” said Johnny running his fingers through his greasy black hair, “I hate this town.”
Johnny strode through the door like a big, tough cowboy and nodded to the bouncers, Biff and Dave.
“Hi.” said Johnny giving a little growl that told the two bruisers that they had better watch themselves. They knew Johnny was an master at several martial arts, and that he always kept nunchucka’s tucked into his socks.
As he entered the main room of the club, Johnny realised that there was no-one else there. Almost nobody!
This is probably the best story I’ve ever read.. but I’m slightly biased cos i wrote it.
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Hi Sherby57
My name is Chester Spangleton from Mud Lake, Idaho. I love Fireheart and have started my own Fireheart blog – http://ilovefireheart.wordpress.com/ I hope you like it because I love you guys! I will be reviewing each of parts of your amazing story on my blog soon!
Yours
Cheshy
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